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Monday, July 23, 2018

The Beach Poem

The Beach
The glistening waves spill upon the shore
On the golden sand.
Little figures ride the waves
As they topple off the boards.
The children making sandcastles
While the babies run them over
The seagulls looking for a meal
Dive right at me
I feed them some hot chips
That was a bad idea
More and more come,
I started a war.
I dive into the ocean
Sand all through my hair,
My eyes start to burn
And I quickly jump out.
My car wont start
I can't leave,
The seagulls swarm around me
Oh god help me please.

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousJuly 31, 2018 at 2:16 PM

    Hello Mia,
    Your poem is great I love all the detail,
    From Grace xx

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  2. AnonymousAugust 10, 2018 at 1:00 PM

    Hi Mia,
    I’m Samantha from SFOA. I love your Beach Poem and I love how you describe the beach. Maybe next time add a photo to make it more colourful. What is your favourite thing to do at the beach? Can’t wait to see what you do next.

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