Hey Mia its Charlotte from SFOA school I really liked you poem because it was very interesting. Maybe next time you could expand your poem for more interest?
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Hey Mia its Charlotte from SFOA school
ReplyDeleteI really liked you poem because it was very interesting. Maybe next time you could expand your poem for more interest?
Thank you Charlotte for your helpful feedback!!!! I will definitely try to add more to my limerick.
DeleteThanks Mia